2nd rounders pretty much come down to luck, so I don't really hold it against a GM for not getting hits in that round, but they can sure be nice bonuses that kickstart the rebuild. It's a numbers game that unfortunately hasn't fallen the Wings' way so far, but 2nd rounders do take longer to develop so we only have a year or two of them so far to evaluate. Canucks got 51 points out of their 2019 2nd rounder Nils Hoeglander last year, John Peterka has 51 points in 61 games this season for Buffalo as a 2020 2nd rounder, another 2020 2nd rounder Brock Faber made the U.S. 4 Nations team already as defenseman, Matthew Knies is a 2021 2nd rounder who put up 45 points last season for the Leafs (arguably inflated from playing with offensive stars), and Lane Hutson of the Habs is a 2022 2nd rounder who is one of this year's top rookies.
Again, the fact that the Wings don't have one of those yet isn't that much of a knock on Yzerman, cause there are way more misses than hits down there league-wide, but until one breaks through I hesitate to say Yzerman has been "great" at drafting. Good or very good is fair enough.